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Leji_hyuga Sage Byakugan
Posts : 592 Points : 558673 Reputation : 3 Join date : 2010-02-09 Age : 32 Location : The village hidden in the Mountain
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| Subject: Re: The Ninja Story Thu Feb 11, 2010 4:36 pm | |
| im making the new chapter's toady anthony you have to do either two or three show toaday | |
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| Subject: Re: The Ninja Story Thu Feb 11, 2010 4:37 pm | |
| get onine anthony and post here |
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Anthony Hatake Genin Elite
Posts : 89 Points : 541072 Reputation : 7 Join date : 2010-02-10 Age : 28 Location : Black moon rising Noches
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| Subject: Re: The Ninja Story Thu Feb 11, 2010 4:53 pm | |
| Hey everybody its time for aj t.v preses the button people start clapping. well lets talk about todays chapter i give it a - Spoiler:
8/10.it was looking good introducing character's but there was no things about mastermaru everybody elses was long but his was very short.
this was aj tv reporting from channel 100 preses the button nothing happens okay who the hell was messing with my controll thingy. starts punching people. ugly man gets on sorry comertional break sacerity carring me off the stage an people starts to boo | |
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Leji_hyuga Sage Byakugan
Posts : 592 Points : 558673 Reputation : 3 Join date : 2010-02-09 Age : 32 Location : The village hidden in the Mountain
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| Subject: Re: The Ninja Story Thu Feb 11, 2010 7:24 pm | |
| Chapter 2-The graduation exam
As im running an jumping on houses with kizo we run it to the ninja acedemy door. takashi is sitting looking out the window.kizo blushing there takashi. mastermaru walks in the room an pronances he's here.'' mastermaru perfect is here''. ''ichamaru looks at him that guys always showing out''. jando is looking at takashi heating up as all the girls are stalking him except a weird girl with three pony tails named tyumi.
A chuunin walks in ''quiet down everyone''.''today you will be giving your exams''. '' the first exam will be on your jutsu an chakra nature,the second test is on taijutsu an genjutsu skills an the third on special jutsu an tolls''.''this will determin your teams some teams will be very strong some will be weak some will be in between but dont complain there all for your own GOOD''. '' ichimaru mara step forward''. ichimaru steps forward come with us.
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leji is called forward he has to test his chakra nature an jutsu.
he says ima fire type.''can you make a fire jutsu by will''. ''no'' leji says okay lets see some jutsu.
leji activates his byakugan an runs after the chuunin ''gental fist'' he hits one of them right in the stomach. the procter says okay okay. he said you get 50 points for the first exam now on to the second exam.'' were going to test you in taijutsu an genjutsu since you already showed us taijutsu you have to do genjutsu or release from it.''which do you choose''.''defending genjutsu''says leji.''alright then look into my eye''.the other chuunin revils a sharnigan in his left eye leji looks inside.neji then thinks''remeber what hiashi said''. flash back
----------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------- ------------- (remeber leji when traped in an genjutsu by a sharnigan user it is very powerful. with your special ability of the byakugan you can get out of most genjutsu with ease) ''i remeber''.leji builds up chakra an ''byakugan'' he looks around in the dark genjutsu to find a week spot in the genjutsu. '' found it''. eight trigram firce palm.he buss out of the genjutsu an is very tired.''you get 100 point leji. currently you have 150 point's you only need 150 to pass which you have. do you choose to continue the test.''yes'' says leji.okay then the third part is too test your tools an special jutsu.your special jutsu is your kenkei genkei special ability we seen you use that so just lets see you dodge tools. ''the sharnigan chuunin throws a umbrella at leji he blocks it with a kunia but 50 kunias bust out of the umbrella making leji get hit. but itsa a log an he's behind the sharnigan chuunin an he throws 3 shriekens an takes out his mother tenten summoning scroll.out comes a skinny scroll neji forms hand seals an a dragon comes out an he says'' rising twin dragons out of the dragon mouth 55 kunias an 25 shrienkens at the sharnigan user.''okay okay stomp it leji hyuuga.the weapons stop.''you pass the exam with 250 points very good job''. he hands leji his leaf village headband.''there's been three people so far to pass ichimaru nara, tsame izanmi an mastermaru.go to room 410 an stay there with the other untell the exam is over.
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Anthony Hatake Genin Elite
Posts : 89 Points : 541072 Reputation : 7 Join date : 2010-02-10 Age : 28 Location : Black moon rising Noches
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| Subject: Re: The Ninja Story Thu Feb 11, 2010 7:27 pm | |
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Leji_hyuga Sage Byakugan
Posts : 592 Points : 558673 Reputation : 3 Join date : 2010-02-09 Age : 32 Location : The village hidden in the Mountain
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| Subject: Re: The Ninja Story Thu Feb 11, 2010 7:32 pm | |
| leji character bio has been updated
ichamaru nara character bio has been made
jando uzuki character bio has been made
tyumi character bio has been made | |
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| Subject: Re: The Ninja Story Fri Feb 12, 2010 1:53 am | |
| i think i now understand how it works |
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Leji_hyuga Sage Byakugan
Posts : 592 Points : 558673 Reputation : 3 Join date : 2010-02-09 Age : 32 Location : The village hidden in the Mountain
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| Subject: Re: The Ninja Story Fri Feb 12, 2010 5:18 am | |
| yea i told you its easy you can have a show to an did you like the newest chapter | |
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| Subject: Re: The Ninja Story Fri Feb 12, 2010 10:28 am | |
| yup lets wait for anthony to contiue the show in the mean time i will learn how to do it |
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Takashi Onoda Onoda Talented Sage Master Takashi The balance master
Posts : 586 Points : 542276 Reputation : 3 Join date : 2010-02-07
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| Subject: Re: The Ninja Story Fri Feb 12, 2010 6:13 pm | |
| i love the story's hey leji in chapter 3 are you going to make my exam's ? | |
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| Subject: Re: The Ninja Story Sat Feb 13, 2010 6:24 am | |
| i think u neeed to make it |
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Leji_hyuga Sage Byakugan
Posts : 592 Points : 558673 Reputation : 3 Join date : 2010-02-09 Age : 32 Location : The village hidden in the Mountain
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| Subject: Re: The Ninja Story Sat Feb 13, 2010 1:56 pm | |
| - Spoiler:
yes the whole chapter three is on kizo an takashi.nothings on mastermaru because he is mysterous right know.
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| Subject: Re: The Ninja Story Sat Feb 13, 2010 5:13 pm | |
| yes i am a llusion to mystery |
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Leji_hyuga Sage Byakugan
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| Subject: Re: The Ninja Story Sat Feb 13, 2010 5:47 pm | |
| yea but later on you wont be | |
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| Subject: Re: The Ninja Story Sat Feb 13, 2010 5:48 pm | |
| yes i am i am perfect and tii strong the paths of noches r mine |
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Leji_hyuga Sage Byakugan
Posts : 592 Points : 558673 Reputation : 3 Join date : 2010-02-09 Age : 32 Location : The village hidden in the Mountain
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| Subject: Re: The Ninja Story Sat Feb 13, 2010 6:16 pm | |
| no in my story the perfect clan can controll all five elements an can use other special jutsu after they copy it.
it has nothing to do with the real black moon clan in the forum an im waiting for ant so he can do the channel thing.
you could take his leave of absentace an put your show on instead of his so i can do the next chapter | |
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| Subject: Re: The Ninja Story Sat Feb 13, 2010 6:35 pm | |
| lets just wait where is ur bro anyways? |
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Leji_hyuga Sage Byakugan
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| Subject: Re: The Ninja Story Sat Feb 13, 2010 6:50 pm | |
| he went to the mall with his friends an then to the movies.
i wonder what movie there seeing im about to leave in like 10 minutes | |
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| Subject: Re: The Ninja Story Sat Feb 13, 2010 6:56 pm | |
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Leji_hyuga Sage Byakugan
Posts : 592 Points : 558673 Reputation : 3 Join date : 2010-02-09 Age : 32 Location : The village hidden in the Mountain
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| Subject: Re: The Ninja Story Sat Feb 13, 2010 7:56 pm | |
| just leaving. im still gone be online because ima have my labtop | |
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| Subject: Re: The Ninja Story Sat Feb 13, 2010 8:03 pm | |
| dont bring it if u dont want man |
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Leji_hyuga Sage Byakugan
Posts : 592 Points : 558673 Reputation : 3 Join date : 2010-02-09 Age : 32 Location : The village hidden in the Mountain
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| Subject: Re: The Ninja Story Sat Feb 13, 2010 8:20 pm | |
| ima bring it just to stay updated im not doing nothing but going to the mall i do that like everyday an ant just got home he's getting on his laptop right now | |
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| Subject: Re: The Ninja Story Sat Feb 13, 2010 8:26 pm | |
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Takashi Onoda Onoda Talented Sage Master Takashi The balance master
Posts : 586 Points : 542276 Reputation : 3 Join date : 2010-02-07
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| Subject: Re: The Ninja Story Sat Feb 13, 2010 8:30 pm | |
| Let's go Leji make chapter 3 ? i cant wait . | |
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Leji_hyuga Sage Byakugan
Posts : 592 Points : 558673 Reputation : 3 Join date : 2010-02-09 Age : 32 Location : The village hidden in the Mountain
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| Subject: Re: The Ninja Story Sat Feb 13, 2010 8:32 pm | |
| yea.he's just got out the shower.
change of plans im not leaving | |
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